FAWN He was crazy, dangerous, and impulsive. I knew who he was. A man with secrets, he wasn’t an innocent. President of the Skull Crawlers MC, I didn’t want anything to do with him. I wanted him. But I hated him, too. A Kindergarten teacher and a Biker. It would never work. KANE She was beautiful and I wanted her. I didn’t want to give another man the chance of taking her from me. Her innocence, her vulnerability was Fire to my Ice, it soothed me…it calmed me. So different from me, yet I found her utterly irresistible. She was the light to my darkness. I wasn’t willing to give her up, and I was determined to make her mine.
From the blurb you would expect a hell of a book, I have also read other peoples reviews before I decided to put mine up, just in case I was the only one, because I do not like to crash an author down, or show disrespect, after all I am a reader not a writer, but this was awful. The best part of this book was the prologue,and the blurb, reading it I thought I was going to get a good read but nope, it went down hill alarmingly fast from there. I have given it one star only because there is nothing in this book that warrants a higher star. I nearly closed it twice. There was no story what so ever, the main male and female roles were awful. Fawn I didn’t like one little bit for a school teacher she sure acted loose and fancy. Kane was weak and pathetic. For a president of an MC I expected so much more. < What exactly was the book about?.> There was no story. How you can call it an MC is beyond me. Just riding a Bike does not make it an MC, dealing with drugs does not make it an MC. Nothing in the book gave it away. The editing was poor the spellings needed re-checking. My advice pull the book, re-edit it, add more to the story because as it stands its nothing and will sink into oblivion. I am sorry if its harsh, but I am a paying customer and read a lot of books, and I do mean a lot of books. So seeing 5 and 4 star ratings I was intrigued. As a blogger I read a lot of different genres MC is one of my favorites so to see a book so badly put together and call it self an MC book is unsettling, as I have no intentions of reading anymore of them. Bad choice of book and I don’t do them very often. If I pick up an MC book It has to have the bad boys, the angst, the drama, the club bunnies, other bikers, an up and coming old lady with some sort of backbone, This book was none of that. I understand each to their own but this one was not for me. You however might like it. I doubt it but I have been wrong before.
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